***Even Without My Eyes- I Know... *** Forum Award 12/3/05

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***Even Without My Eyes- I Know... *** Forum Award 12/3/05

Post by GoddessErika » Sat Aug 27, 2005 5:33 am

Forum Award Winner: December 03, 2005
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I saw you again last night
Nevermind that you did not see me

Dreams are supposed to be like that
Reclusive and mysterious
Each of which you truely are
At least in my mind anyhow
Much like a wordless thought
Somehow spoken, yet left unsaid

Invisible in my waking hour

So vivid while I sleep
Every detail of you becomes so clear that
Even without my eyes- I know that you are beautiful
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Post by Tom Watson » Sat Aug 27, 2005 11:08 am

Very nicely done Erika...

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Post by GoddessErika » Sat Aug 27, 2005 2:48 pm

Thanks Tom! :cool:
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Post by Friend_forever » Sat Aug 27, 2005 11:42 pm

Very nice Erica

Really cool!
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
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Post by Eternum 1 » Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:21 am

:cool: :cool:
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Post by GoddessErika » Sun Aug 28, 2005 11:00 am

Thanks you two! :cool:
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Post by babygoth20 » Sun Aug 28, 2005 11:15 am

Well written Erika... I liked it
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Post by GoddessErika » Thu Oct 27, 2005 5:49 pm

:mrgreen: Thanks BG... I like this one too!
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Post by Shane » Thu Oct 27, 2005 6:43 pm

I'm glad to see some of us havent forgotten about the "forms"

Well done young lady :mrgreen:



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Post by GoddessErika » Thu Oct 27, 2005 7:18 pm

Thanks Shane! I like these, but often times things come to me in quick surges, and they don't fit a form very well when that happens! Maybe I'll try again soon though...
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Post by thief of dreams » Fri Oct 28, 2005 12:34 am

that looks incredibly hard...
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
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Post by Gillian » Fri Oct 28, 2005 2:32 am

I think that's Erika's line.
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Post by GoddessErika » Fri Oct 28, 2005 7:57 am

:shock: Whoa Gillian... where's your mind today?
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Post by negatvone » Fri Oct 28, 2005 8:25 am

LOL, Gillian. I was thinking the same thing. :mrgreen:

Erika, the Acrostic compliments the title. Kind of like a before and after statement. I like it. Pretty cool.
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Post by GoddessErika » Sun Nov 06, 2005 12:22 pm

Thanks Jim! BTW... how've ya been? Any archives needing attn lately?
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