Orchid (A Cinquain)
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Orchid (A Cinquain)
Orchid
Gentle, Unique
Growing wild, ever free
To entrance and beguile my soul
Flower
Shane
Gentle, Unique
Growing wild, ever free
To entrance and beguile my soul
Flower
Shane
Last edited by Shane on Wed Jun 22, 2005 1:20 am, edited 2 times in total.
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hi shane just out a little, good try and i liked the imagery
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Objective - to write a cinquin poem
Poems that follow the syllable pattern. Line 1: 2sylables
Line 2 - 4, Line 3 - 6, Line 4 - 8, Line 5 - 2
Orchid 2) syllables correct
Gentle and Unique 6)should be four
They grow wild and free 5) should be 6
and entrance and beguil my soul 8) correc
Flower 2) correct
Advice take out the and’s for starters
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Objective - to write a cinquin poem
Poems that follow the syllable pattern. Line 1: 2sylables
Line 2 - 4, Line 3 - 6, Line 4 - 8, Line 5 - 2
Orchid 2) syllables correct
Gentle and Unique 6)should be four
They grow wild and free 5) should be 6
and entrance and beguil my soul 8) correc
Flower 2) correct
Advice take out the and’s for starters
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Suggestion:
<center>Orchid
Gentle, Unique
Growing wild, ever free
To entrance and beguile my soul
Flower
</center>
H.
<center>Orchid
Gentle, Unique
Growing wild, ever free
To entrance and beguile my soul
Flower
</center>
H.
Last edited by heinzs on Wed Jun 22, 2005 3:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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