HeartBreaker [two Quinzaines combined]

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Jade
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HeartBreaker [two Quinzaines combined]

Post by Jade » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:28 am

heartbreaker

He said today he loves me.
Will he love me still
when it ends?
I will not love another.
Must I break a heart
once again?
sticks and stones are hard on bones
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
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Post by Edgar A. Poe » Mon Sep 06, 2004 11:07 pm

Nicely formed!
"Children are never too tender to be whipped. Like tough beefsteaks, the more you beat them, the more tender they become." myself

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Re: HeartBreaker [two Quinzaines combined]

Post by Jade » Sat Jun 04, 2016 10:09 pm

I really need to refresh myself on all the different forms of poetry. I've forgotten them all. :darn:
sticks and stones are hard on bones
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
click here to view **MY ARCHIVE**

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