Poem of the Week: May 7, 2006
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Poem of the Week: May 7, 2006
Winner: Poem of the Week: May 7, 2006
...drip...drop...
by foreverflame
There along the open page
are written words in simple phrase,
but then the written words, they stop
and there, a teardrop is displayed.
Draped across the tables glass
are found some remnants of the past
that show a potent view of sadness
through a multitude of splashes.
There upon the lukewarm chair
a hint of sadness fills the air
when closer sight leads one to find
a single tear from crying eyes.
A dampened spot upon the floor
shows spiritual pain in physical form.
Still yet it glistens, refusing to fade.
Declining its role to absorb away.
Upon the door, a handle sits
with coldness drenched upon its grip.
Light reflects it, makes it shine.
Its surface covered from someone’s cry.
Within the room, the lights are dark.
A chilling feel entwines the heart.
The bed is felt to a surprise,
for it remains dry?
but…
On the floor, a person lays
within a sleep too deep to wake.
And on his face, tears hug him close.
Remaining the things
that loved him most.
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...drip...drop...
by foreverflame
There along the open page
are written words in simple phrase,
but then the written words, they stop
and there, a teardrop is displayed.
Draped across the tables glass
are found some remnants of the past
that show a potent view of sadness
through a multitude of splashes.
There upon the lukewarm chair
a hint of sadness fills the air
when closer sight leads one to find
a single tear from crying eyes.
A dampened spot upon the floor
shows spiritual pain in physical form.
Still yet it glistens, refusing to fade.
Declining its role to absorb away.
Upon the door, a handle sits
with coldness drenched upon its grip.
Light reflects it, makes it shine.
Its surface covered from someone’s cry.
Within the room, the lights are dark.
A chilling feel entwines the heart.
The bed is felt to a surprise,
for it remains dry?
but…
On the floor, a person lays
within a sleep too deep to wake.
And on his face, tears hug him close.
Remaining the things
that loved him most.
_________________________________
Last edited by heinzs on Sun May 14, 2006 3:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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