Poem of the Week: November 6, 2005

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Poem of the Week: November 6, 2005

Post by heinzs » Sat Nov 05, 2005 11:47 am

Winner: Poem of the Week: November 6, 2005

by thief of dreams

Raindrops falling
Covering everything
With a moving skin
That crawls and slides
Obscuring the tears
Giving cover
To the shadows

It’s an ever changing world
That we all live in
Where happiness becomes pain
Light becomes dark
Only to give away to the dawn
With the unstoppable sun
As it dries the ground
Bringing warmth to the cold
And inviting hope
To those who dwell in their misery

Pain can bring about collapse
But hope and understanding
Can rebuild the broken
And I walk away into the night
Knowing a small smile
Will spread across this face
As longing turns to relief
Not to turn over a new leaf
But to water the hopes of happiness
To come as the rain dries
And the sun lights the skies

No regrets
No self pity
No blame
No hard feelings
Last edited by heinzs on Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:36 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Friend_forever » Sat Nov 05, 2005 11:58 am


Congrats Terry!!
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara

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Post by Tom Watson » Sat Nov 05, 2005 12:02 pm

Truly a poem worthy of a Poet Laureate.
Worthy of reading and re-reading, with an open mind, to absorb and see how this can apply to all of us.
No regrets
No self pity
No blame
No hard feelings
Amen to that!
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Post by ninian » Sat Nov 05, 2005 12:28 pm

congrats! :thumbsup:
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Post by chthon » Sat Nov 05, 2005 4:32 pm

Well deserved, TOD.
An outstanding work. :thumbsup: :hello:
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Post by Cure » Sat Nov 05, 2005 10:08 pm

congrats :cool: :thumbsup:
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Post by thief of dreams » Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:22 pm

aww. you people are too kind.
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Friedrich Nietzsche

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Post by anusara » Wed Nov 09, 2005 5:08 pm

congratulations :thumbsup:

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