Poem(s) of the Week: August 28, 2005

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Poem(s) of the Week: August 28, 2005

Post by heinzs » Sat Aug 27, 2005 1:17 pm

Two winners this week:


Winner: Poem of the Week: August 28, 2005
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from each flutter
by jeannerene


at what hour comes this night
my beloved’s image
under a pillow biding
waits
. . . dallys neath linen
of timeless thread
devotion’s delicate weave
impatient
for my kiss
lips wet with rue
to set
upon his cool and counterfeit brow
phantom cheek
pines
to have me
leave my touch intangible
carried on the night’s haze
and diminished with a restless breath

. . . silenced
this brutal keepsake
I stroke
caress
at what hour comes my night
most tenderly
. . . to absorb each angle, point and slant
of he
by eye and fingertip
only
now left to me
and so
to dream
soft on sheets
of pastel fantasy

he weeps
. . . and from each flutter
cast by wick and wax
I mind my dearest’s misery
maddened
an unwilling portrait
lifted from beneath my memories
. . silenced

he
gathers my curls in his hand
draws the ribbons of my gown
at what hour comes our night

jeanne rené 8.05
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Winner: Poem of the Week: August 28, 2005
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As Children Tip My Weathered Stone
by bags123

I'll never wonder when I'm dead
No good dreams left inside my head
No words described upon my lips
No touch upon cold fingertips

Can't hear the thunder underground
Where silence is the only sound
Where lay the lies of truth inscribed
Where I can't see what darkness hides

Indifferently, I'll then decay
As quietly as each new day
As winter whispers through my bones
As children tip my weathered stone
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Post by ninian » Sat Aug 27, 2005 3:24 pm

ah both wonderful choices!!!

terrific work jeannerene and bags! congrats :)

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Post by Maid of Iron » Sat Aug 27, 2005 4:39 pm

Both of these are certainly worthy.

Jeannerene, this piece tells on you - you are a virtual female Shakespear dear lady, and I am awed by your skill - truly.


My Congratulations to the both of you!

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<i>"And she told him how it was Forgall had gone to Emain, and had advised him to go and learn warriors’ feats, the way they two might not meet again. Then each of them promised to be true to the other till they would meet again, unless death should come between them, and they said farewell to one another, and Cuchulain turned towards Alban."</i> ~The Courting of Emer

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Post by chthon » Sat Aug 27, 2005 5:10 pm

Well done both of you.
I hope you are both feeling proud and just a little bit smug...
Congratulations to you both. Well deserved!
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Post by Friend_forever » Sat Aug 27, 2005 11:31 pm

Truly both worthy of the honour...

Enjoyed the reads...
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
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