Poem of the Week: June 5, 2005

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Poem of the Week: June 5, 2005

Post by heinzs » Sat Jun 04, 2005 1:45 am

Winner: Poem of the Week: June 5, 2005
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lower than the surface of this world of lines
by OriOnpheOnix


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ghosts invade the mind
a ceaseless sway
a foreign way
sublime
the way
time
travels away
in
tedium
in
spectrum
in
cerebellum
in
land of the broken ships
wasting away
in a day
which
slips
farther away
as every sun
comes with fresh tears
every destination
a return
from whence it began
a whole of a world
it ran in
a scan
of an
oval oblivion
caving in
only to return
breathing in
only to yearn
another turn
about it's axis
within
an access
modulation
ceaseless
foriegn
entering a mind in sections of vivisection

a mind







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Post by Debbie » Sun Jun 05, 2005 11:06 am

Congratulations OriOnpheOnix award well deserved.. :thewave:
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Post by Eternum 1 » Sun Jun 05, 2005 12:08 pm

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Post by foreverflame » Mon Jun 06, 2005 5:07 am

Congrats, Ori. Man, you hit the ground runnin' ever since you came to the pages...
"Born into
these crooked ways.
I never even asked to come,
so now I'm living in the days.
I struggle and fight
to stay alive,
hoping that one day
I earn my chance to die..."
- Goodie Mob

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Post by OriOnpheOnix » Mon Jun 06, 2005 6:39 pm

thank you Debbie.

thank you Et.

thank you fFlame. i appreciate your words (humbly * with solemn facial expression * hits chest three times with fist)

thank you Negatv. for nominating me for this award. i appreciate

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Post by foreverflame » Tue Jun 07, 2005 4:37 am

*gives simple head gesture, with smirk* :cool:
"Born into
these crooked ways.
I never even asked to come,
so now I'm living in the days.
I struggle and fight
to stay alive,
hoping that one day
I earn my chance to die..."
- Goodie Mob

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Post by OriOnpheOnix » Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:28 am

:cool:

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