Poem of the Week: October 17, 2004

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Poem of the Week: October 17, 2004

Post by heinzs » Sat Oct 16, 2004 8:56 pm

Winner: Poem of the Week: October 17, 2004
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Bring Back
by Tom Watson


Bring back your dreams
Tell me again your plans, schemes...

Oh, the cold nights linger
passing slowly like a teasing finger
tracing the lines of your once bright smile
in the watery tears of this trial.

Shout to me your voice
Whether in love, hate, pain..your choice...

Still silence greets the morning light
Deafening in its hollow echoes from your eternal night
Your laughter is rumpled up in empty sheets
in drying tapes, cracking under times blazing heat..

Hold me in impossible love,
no chance of returns to places we dreamed of...

This old heart beats, tired, a machine
Only, its caverns emptying of what once was seen
as crowded with your presence;
your giving, taking, laughing, crying...fading in the distance...

Bring back to this tired life
purpose, joy, shared dreams...my lost wife...


Tom
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Post by Candy_Cane » Sat Oct 16, 2004 9:05 pm

YAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congrats Tom!!!!!! :thewave:

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Post by Spazway » Sat Oct 16, 2004 11:19 pm

WOO HOO! WAY TO GO, TOM! :cheers:

Well deserved, sir. Congratulations! :mrgreen:

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Post by Friend_forever » Sun Oct 17, 2004 8:51 am

Congrats Tom...!!!
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara

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Post by Tom Watson » Sun Oct 17, 2004 1:25 pm

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:mrgreen:
Thank you everyone....I am so flattered that this poem would even be nominated....let alone to win the week.....All of you are so kind that simple words escape me ...

Tom
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