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Favorite: Is This What Forever Feels Like? by ChaoticWhisper

Post by Ven » Wed Oct 29, 2003 5:23 am

Title: Is This What Forever Feels Like ?
Author: ChaoticWhisper.

Originally nominated by: Berlie.

Originally posted in General Poetry. 10th June 2003.
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Wind
Caresses my skin
like soft petals on tender grass
so fragile
and yet so strong

Breeze
carrying with it
the scent of daffodills and roses
forever moving
passes through it all

Torn
between lying in the meadow
and running through the waterfalls
I find myself
making a concious decision

Cool water
washes through
the sand colored hair
blurs my vision
yet sharpens reality

The still afternoon
reverberates in my soul
and reminds me
that maybe
life is worth something

Sweet tomorrow
now worth facing
because nature wrapped me up
and reminded me
that i was one of the special children

Peaceful morning
almost never experienced
weighted decisions
exquisite bliss
Is this what forever feels like?


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