Yellow Fields

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Altawell
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Yellow Fields

Post by Altawell » Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:40 am

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In a place where
The East meets the West
And the North meets the South
Where the end of polarities
And the birth of singularity
Where a ‘human mind’
View ‘thyself’ history
Nothing but the beginning
Of the ending
Of
A
Personality
Disintegrating, disappearing
No difference than the death
Of
A
Human, animal or even
A
Plant
Physical body



Yellow fields
In the mind of a deity
As it creates multiplicity
Via subtle
Delicate
Primordial energy
Creating once again
Another level of
Diversity
With the never ending
To the cycles
Of
Chaos
And
Creativity
Fulfilling the so-called
The forgotten
Ancient
Yellow fields
Prophecy



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Re: Yellow Fields

Post by moonflower » Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:57 am

enjoyed this!..i love the format you wrote it in :thumbsup:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: Yellow Fields

Post by psychotic pretender » Thu Dec 01, 2011 11:25 am

nice peice
i really liked the end
Altawell wrote:Chaos And Creativity Fulfilling the so-calledThe forgottenAncient Yellow fieldsProphecy
great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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Altawell
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Re: Yellow Fields

Post by Altawell » Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:25 am

Hi,

Thank you for your comments
Glad to know that you like the poem. :bow:
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Re: Yellow Fields

Post by Altawell » Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:45 am

Hi and thank you for your comments.

The poem is a reflection of the continous process taking place within and without!

In ancient time 'Yellow Fields' prophecy mentioned and talked about before major changes to the world took place at that time!

Thank you again :hello:
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