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Post by Laverne Pacquire » Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:45 pm

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Re: Yes Bugs

Post by bags123 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:42 pm

I hate bugs,...and this one certainly captures that feeling well. :cheers:
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Re: Yes Bugs

Post by heinzs » Thu Dec 02, 2010 8:44 pm

The repeated line "there is a bug in my pants, yes bugs" is grammatically incorrect... and it's bugging the hell out of me... lol

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Re: Yes Bugs

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Sat Dec 11, 2010 9:11 am

bugs are a f...ckin pest...what are u going do!...lol

so much for poetry criticism here....

heinzs wrote:The repeated line "there is a bug in my pants, yes bugs" is grammatically incorrect... and it's bugging the hell out of me... lol

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Re: Yes Bugs

Post by Bruno » Sat Dec 11, 2010 10:45 pm

The best way to debug your pants
Is to import a legion of warrior ants
they are a wicked, warring, murderous crew
and do to other bugs what they did to you.

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Re: Yes Bugs

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:34 pm

I always have to write with military soldiers
Who know they can't write, this is right
But it's not worth my time to waste
Because I like to write with taste


Interesting thoughts....the poem is not personal it's actually for Shel Silverstein! :hello:

Bruno wrote:The best way to debug your pants
Is to import a legion of warrior ants
they are a wicked, warring, murderous crew
and do to other bugs what they did to you.
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Re: Yes Bugs

Post by Bruno » Sun Dec 12, 2010 9:35 pm

Please say :hello: to Shel for me! :thumbsup:

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Re: Yes Bugs

Post by Debbie » Mon May 23, 2011 7:51 am

LOL..too funny...can picture you dancing around with that bug in your pants or bugs ...LOL :hello:
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Re: Yes Bugs

Post by moonflower » Mon Jun 06, 2011 4:34 pm

funny! :thumbsup: :grin:
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