Just Messin Around...

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Laverne Pacquire
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Just Messin Around...

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:38 pm

Mirror mirror on the wall
Are you ugly and did you call
Are you on the couch reading my poem
Why didn't you call me or leave me a poem

Now I'm mad and its all for you
It's white outside and Christmas presents are in view
Make me some hot chocolate before I go away
Do make me wait another day

Mirror mirror on the wall
Who is the prettiest girl of them all
Can she write the best poetry
If she can, where is she,

Don't disappoint me and make she a he
Mirror mirror on the wall
Give her boobs and body
Personality and all
No I'm just kidding

I'm just playing around, today
I thought I'd stop by and say
mirror, mirror on the wall
Who is the prettiest girl of them all

Give her to me!
You're Beautiful..Don't You Know It!

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psychotic pretender
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Re: Just Messin Around...

Post by psychotic pretender » Wed Nov 30, 2011 9:54 am

interesting
boobs and all :lol:

good write, good read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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Re: Just Messin Around...

Post by heinzs » Wed Nov 30, 2011 10:02 am

Thanks for refreshing this one, PP. Most of Laverne's poetry is way over my head. This one is charming and a lot of fun.

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psychotic pretender
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Re: Just Messin Around...

Post by psychotic pretender » Wed Nov 30, 2011 10:13 am

no problem,
i cant stand to see a good poem go to waste
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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