Lineage of Destruction

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Kamasui
Clearwater Poet
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Joined: Mon May 11, 2009 5:28 pm
Location: Virginia

Lineage of Destruction

Post by Kamasui » Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:16 pm

My patience has ended,
My pain, suduced by diligence,
Brother of anxiety,
Employer of insanity,
Stamp confused truth to my thoughts.

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xmartinx=]
Clearwater Poet
Posts: 103
Joined: Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:29 am
Location: London

Re: Lineage of Destruction

Post by xmartinx=] » Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:07 am

very nice, a while since ive read abit of you kamasui... i love thee fact that your mind was seduced by exahaustion. when u need to do something but dont want to the needy feeling "seduces" your state of mind until you eventuially commit the action. very nice, the concept of family and how this links to emotion. =]
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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