For people who love to dream, and dream to love x

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For people who love to dream, and dream to love x

Post by xmartinx=] » Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:06 pm

Angels sun, shine high above,
purify me in this holy hour,
for i cannot see beyond my eyes,
and i cannot think outside of logic.

You holy rays reflect off a surface,
more beautiful than your own,
for she has more beauty,
than all the gods and all of heaven.

Your glow refracts from her eyes,
of which are a deep green,
my vibrant nature, in a dusty world,
for without her,
i cannot survive.

Every night i return to a place,
were it is but me and the moon,
and the stars and my thoughts...
and the doubts and the pain.

The place remembers me well,
it laughed when i was alone,
it cried when i was angry,
it is now silent as i am in love.

Every night i burden this place,
with my thoughts and my wildest dreams,
of one person, one goddess,
my goddess, of whom i have the pleasure,
to know and to love, with all my heart,
no matter how much it hurts.

She will never know (the true extent of my) my love,
she will never know (the true extent of my) my pain,
if she eventually breaks my heart,
i doubt i could ever love again.

p.s you dont say the brackets, its to help the understanding of the poem and my feelings. just to let you know =p
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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Re: For people who love to dream, and dream to love x

Post by moonflower » Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:25 pm

ahh..lovers and dreamers..how they do seem to go together! i enjoyed the sentiments of this poem.. :thumbsup:
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Re: For people who love to dream, and dream to love x

Post by joetraff » Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:50 am

how romantic. keep your writing flow.
You are definite gonna be famous.

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Re: For people who love to dream, and dream to love x

Post by xmartinx=] » Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:51 am

wow thank you so much. this one actually made my girlfriend cry appernetly so very happy with this one. funnily enough, its the one i thought most about. this really means alot to me and i hope ill impress you further.

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