My Life, My Love, My World...My Pain

[xmartinx=]]

my love my life my world,
you save me everyday,
but when i can not see you,
one more finger slips away.

i cant live without you,
i dont think i ever would,
the only problem here,
is that i think that you could.

my life revolves around you,
this i cannot change,
you my love, my darling,
forced my life to re-arrange.

whenever i am with you,
emotions that you have curled,
one touch of your hand tells me,
im the richest man in the world.

for what use is there for money,
except to satisfy your greed,
i have given everything,
for you are all i need.

you are my light, my candle,
to save me from the dark,
but when your gone im forced to bear,
the satanic devils mark.

if i ever found you dying,
id force myself into hell,
id make a deal with lucifer,
of which i cannot tell.

small change for a great treasure,
my soul id have to pay,
a price would willingly give him,
so you could walk away.

The inspiration behind this was my love for my girlriend. its silly really, but all day i think of none but her and cannot wait for us to be alone for she has the most beautiful eyes ive ever seen and would willingly stare into them for all eternity and i belive she is THE ONE for me. i definatly know how much i love her and my love, ironically, is my pain but the problem is i dont think she understands how much i love her. love is a silly word that is thrown around a lot. but when a simple visit to my house is cancelled, it forced me to write this. a crush. i dont think so... anyway sorry for being so depressive thank you for reading. enjoy replys. thank you =]

[moonflower]

you expressed the euphoric highs and the descending lows of love! ..enjoyed reading!

[Kamasui]

I really enjoyed the poem. Quick writes are fun to make sometimes. Just be careful, because an undying lust could possibly end up to be too much.

[xmartinx=]]

tank you so much guys, posted 1 day and have got 2 replys already. but yea, i thinks shes the most beautifu girl in the world and i think if she ever breaks up with me, it was worth the pain. thanks agen