What do you do?

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strawbz

What do you do?

Post by strawbz » Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:43 pm

(sorry, i haven't really structured it, it is as it came out. also i have used vulgar words, apologies)

What do you do?
Where do you turn?
Who do you turn to?
When there’s no end in sight
Do you carry on with blind hope?
That you’re on the right road
You’re deep in this tunnel
With no light at the end
So dark you’ll stumble and fall
Your time is ticking
No-one’s there to hear your call
You’re on your own now son
Have you got what it takes?
To get out of this mess
No telling yourself “it’ll be fine”
No, that won’t work this time
Redemption is gonna’ take your all
When you’re curled up at night
Away from societies sadistic sight
Do you think they’d care
Do you think that their so called help
Isn’t to be used to their own gains?
They’d sooner piss on you
To get ahead
No matter what happens
Always remember this
People are selfish by nature
Charity is a selfish endeavour
They don’t give a shit about you
They just think it looks good on them.
Feeding their own ego’s
This is why you need to get yourself out now
Make something of yourself
Live for yourself and not to please another.

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Re: What do you do?

Post by xmartinx=] » Mon Jun 14, 2010 1:15 am

i commend you my friend. very very cool, love the use of syballance, it really portrays your hate for the people of society and helps anyone who hasnt gone through this phase, to understand and feel what is coming. nicly done
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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