My Crystalline Blue

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starfire
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My Crystalline Blue

Post by starfire » Tue Jun 17, 2008 7:08 pm

My crystalline blue,
I dance between your outstretched arms,
Transparent as my every thought,
I drift away in you.

My crystalline blue,
You kiss me with your finger tips,
And sing to my vermillion heart,
I blossom under you.

My crystallline blue,
Your echos cease my jade tipped sorrow,
And sweep the fire from my face,
I take this gift from you.

My crystalline blue,
You nuture blooming green in me,
Enlighten shades of alabaster,
As only you can do.

My crystalline blue.
"If a man does not know what harbor he is seeking, no light will be enough to guide him."

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JGarrison
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Re: My Crystalline Blue

Post by JGarrison » Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:08 pm

beautiful piece... and you used the word "vermillion"... you win :bow:
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”

-Jack Kerouac-

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starfire
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Re: My Crystalline Blue

Post by starfire » Wed Jun 18, 2008 2:55 pm

awww... shucks, I don't know what to say!
hehe

VERMILLION!
(do I win again?)

thnx for the comment!
"If a man does not know what harbor he is seeking, no light will be enough to guide him."

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