What is this which one feels?

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pixie dust
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What is this which one feels?

Post by pixie dust » Sat Mar 29, 2008 12:19 pm

What is this which one feels…?
I believe you & I would call this happiness!
Which I don’t know why I feel this…
But which I think & do not know is that I am moving on….
So many guys..
So little time…
Before I die to find that One that I
Can’t live without….
Even If I have so less of time!
I will take it slow..
For which I won’t go
Fast in to what we call love..
So I will not fall apart.
So I shall not be as glass.
For which God has surly
Shined on me..
So I may heal..
So I may love again
Let the light god shin on you
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psychotic pretender
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Re: What is this which one feels?

Post by psychotic pretender » Sun Mar 30, 2008 7:37 pm

you will love again little sis

promise

great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889
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Re: What is this which one feels?

Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 21, 2008 7:08 pm

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Re: What is this which one feels?

Post by Moushka » Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:41 pm

Here's me just after my last relationship after being single for 13 years ( :smack: Cathy, what were you thinking....you thought you knew it all.....wake up)....good poem......going slow so important.......
Stuck on Number 2. Learning to begin.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
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Debbie
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Re: What is this which one feels?

Post by Debbie » Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:50 am

Love hurts...you will love again though...nice write :thewave:
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
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Re: What is this which one feels?

Post by poetgirl122 » Wed Apr 22, 2009 7:56 am

niceee. Strong words and a strong meaning. I can definatly relate.
***Im stronger than the strongest drug you ever had. Mix them all together and i'd still be twice as bad. I know you wants some more.***
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