To a friend

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pixie dust
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To a friend

Post by pixie dust » Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:12 am

I remember
the first time I saw you,
such a loser..
Such a retard..
But in a good way

Always making me laugh.
So hard until I cried..

What happened my friend.

Now I see you in pain.
Hurting..
Because
I can

feel your pain..

Remembering the way you
took my tears away.
The way you took my hand
Told me it was ok…

Never trying to get with me
in my time of pain..
Such a great friend.
What happened to us?

Now we never talk…
Our eyes pass & say hey..
But not as it used to be.
We were so close..

I miss you. My friend..
My bro
Let the light god shin on you

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Re: To a friend

Post by psychotic pretender » Sun Feb 03, 2008 11:32 am

now i never did figure out who this was about

cody or dexter????

great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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Re: To a friend

Post by pixie dust » Sun Feb 03, 2008 1:41 pm

In ways,both!
Let the light god shin on you

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Re: To a friend

Post by psychotic pretender » Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:59 am

oooohhhh,

ok

gotcha

:thumbsup:
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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Re: To a friend

Post by pixie dust » Tue Feb 05, 2008 1:16 pm

Yea :angel:
Let the light god shin on you

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Re: To a friend

Post by poetgirl122 » Wed Feb 06, 2008 6:52 am

greta poem, it really sucks to loose a freind, but maybe there waiting for you to talk to them, just a guess, you never know. good job. :thewave:
***Im stronger than the strongest drug you ever had. Mix them all together and i'd still be twice as bad. I know you wants some more.***

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Re: To a friend

Post by pixie dust » Wed Feb 06, 2008 2:36 pm

:angel: Yea... Thanks! :angel:
Let the light god shin on you

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