This time, I walked away.

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AndNeverLetGo

This time, I walked away.

Post by AndNeverLetGo » Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:30 pm

Why can't you love me,
Like I love you?
I think thats the least I deserve
after all you put me through.

I can't take this anymore
Its time to speak
I walk up to you,
but my knees feel weak.

The words come easily
to my surprise
From the darkness you've surrounded me in,
I will soon rise.

I don't need your help.
You haven't offered it before.
You've known all along
that I need more.

One call every week,
A lot more garunteed
I'm through with your lies
You know longer have a hold over me.

So stand there
looking shocked
Guess what,
This time it was me that walked.

Now you've felt
what I felt before
Can you blame me,
For wanting more?

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psychotic pretender
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Re: This time, I walked away.

Post by psychotic pretender » Mon Jan 21, 2008 6:27 am

young love

a bloody battle

back biting, stabbing in the back, underhanded deeds committed by everybody

man i dont miss my youth

great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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pixie dust
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Re: This time, I walked away.

Post by pixie dust » Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:37 pm

:angel: I have went thought this with a tard before...so I really understand! :thumbsup:
Let the light god shin on you

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Re: This time, I walked away.

Post by poetgirl122 » Wed Feb 06, 2008 6:44 am

loved this poem, and its message. good job. :thewave:
***Im stronger than the strongest drug you ever had. Mix them all together and i'd still be twice as bad. I know you wants some more.***

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xclaim

Re: This time, I walked away.

Post by xclaim » Sat Mar 01, 2008 12:41 pm

Loved it.

what an oddly familiar situation.

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nrip4life
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Re: This time, I walked away.

Post by nrip4life » Sat Mar 01, 2008 7:24 pm

:bow:
Old too soon, smart too late....-anonymous

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