The Epic of the Red Love Story

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The Epic of the Red Love Story

Post by Hiyu » Mon Dec 24, 2007 9:41 pm

"If you want something
With all your mind, heart and soul
The universe will conspire
For you to have it"

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An unanticipated memory entwined our destinies
Unexpectedly unfolding the love that never was
A look in the eyes, a gesture from the soul
The moments are born into the lover's grasp

The soul, the heart of the two young lovers
Almost became one, with intimacy as its weapon
But in every relationship, the truest first step
Is to introduce yourselves, as friends and not lovers

Oh, skip everything and be blinded by the light!
False assurance of true love at first sight!
What about the power and jealousy's might?
When a third comes to a duality that never was?

And now, what's left of the sword, the male?
Will someone ever live to tell the tale?
The potence of jealousy and false assurance
The wrong thought of a love that never was!

A fool, living a dream the man became
With his own realization, the war came
Hurt by the love he thought he was loved
Kill everyone in sight and let the power rise above!

Thus ends the first third of the duality that never was
But what about new foes, new man she looks for?
Man became a fool yet and yet ever again
With an illusion that turned sweetness into sour...

Come, oh you second third of the duality!
Break yet again the duality that never was!
But, why haven't you continue with the siege?
When the man's princess maybe taken by the second third!

Oh, pitiful, the man was
He became a mancover then a reserve...
With the power of the third third of the duality that never was
Does he stand a chance in winning over his princess?

But what divine intervention had occurred
With anger as a weapon, the man won his princess
Is it love, is it indeed the divine love
That he has always looked for and above the rest?

No it isn't, I must say
The poor pitiful foolish man fell again
To a love with always a third in the duality that never was
Does he ever stand a chance against such paradoxical heaven?

For then he realized:
"What about me as your reason?
When true love is known by all
For never having any reasons!"

Be careful of what you desire, you who reads this epic
For the universe will give it to you
But never does the universe know
How you must feel over when your desire manifests true!
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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Re: The Epic of the Red Love Story

Post by heinzs » Sat Jan 12, 2008 4:06 pm

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