A Rant on life

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Inurooshi
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A Rant on life

Post by Inurooshi » Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:26 pm

I love my friends,
I love my family,
I love my life,
I have no goals,

I just want a simple job,
Something medial, mediocre,
Something to which I can submerge myself in,
And live in days of memories,

Live in solitary friendship,
Not pursuing anything,
Just living with out nothing,
That is my dream,

But the others,
They call at me, urge me to be like them,
I don’t want to,
They constantly push forward,

Ignoring those memories,
They replace them with facts,
Facts that dictate their actions,
But I am guided forever by emotions,

Why can’t they understand?
That I want to be alone in a bubble,
Containing my insanity,
Containing my emotions,

Why must they be so cold?
It’s no longer there,
The same warm spark,
All has vanished,

Just leave me alone,
I don’t want to be the doctor of tomorrow,
Nor the leader in pioneering a new concept,
I just want my nine to five,

In my own world,
Where reality is ripped from its seams,
And ushers for the surges of dreams,
Won’t you join me in my world?
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Re: A Rant on life

Post by foreverflame » Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:29 am

It's so ironic that they spend so much time pushing and pulling, and no time enjoying. I find that the paths they try to push you on always lead to nowhere. It makes you an addict, always needing to gain. Always needing to be "caught up."

I've lost friends to this too. Ran after the "normal life." Now they miss what use to be, and they are far from happy.

Excellent write. It's good to know there are people that think like this.
"Born into
these crooked ways.
I never even asked to come,
so now I'm living in the days.
I struggle and fight
to stay alive,
hoping that one day
I earn my chance to die..."
- Goodie Mob

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Re: A Rant on life

Post by Cyan » Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:36 pm

I agree

but..


with all thats wrong with the world.. all that needs fixing.. everyone assumes everyone else will do the fixing.. that it will all right itself.. they scream and slander the system.. but they themselves invent nothing.. invite nothing..

fed up with gas prices? Screaming for enviromental safe fuels? When was the last time you invented another source of combustion? Not smart enough you say? or not enough drive to learn? Not enough ambition to do anything other than work as a cash register you say?

just an example of many..

but yes.. living a simple life definately has it's merits.
"in the bright light of day and even in the happiest moments of our waking spirit we are ordered around a little by the habits of our dreams."
- Nietzsche

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