Angel of Beauty

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TeenPoet
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Angel of Beauty

Post by TeenPoet » Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:18 pm

Beautiful,
She is so beautiful
With her honey blonde hair
Her crystal blue eyes
An angel of beauty
To everyones eyes
But she doesnt agree

Pain,
So much pain
Hurting deep inside
Behind her crystal blue eyes
Invisible, nonexistant
To everyones eyes
They just dont see
"Love is as strong as death. Why be capable of feelings if we're not to have them? Why long for things if they're not meant to be ours?" -Tristan & Isolde

"Reality Is A Funny Thing. There Are No Defenses Against It Except Madness."-Listen To The Silence By David W. Elliot

No matter how many times you've felt it, love will always remain infinite and mysterious. Like God, love runs ahead of us, and just when we think we've caught up, it slips farther away....
-Deepak Chopra
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teenpoet

Post by Debbie » Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:03 am

well spoken teenpoet.....many look so happy and beautiful on the outside..but if they truly looked into the eyes and saw what's going on inside they'd be surprised...well done.. :bow:
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
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Post by heinzs » Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:00 am

:cool: :cool:
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Re: Angel of Beauty

Post by heinzs » Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:41 pm

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Re: Angel of Beauty

Post by foreverflame » Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:19 am

A mirror of a poem. Poetic balance. :thumbsup:

Sad how we feel we are on a stage, always having to entertain someone else.....
"Born into
these crooked ways.
I never even asked to come,
so now I'm living in the days.
I struggle and fight
to stay alive,
hoping that one day
I earn my chance to die..." - Goodie Mob
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Re: Angel of Beauty

Post by pixie dust » Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:41 pm

:thewave: I love it :thewave:
Let the light god shin on you
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Re: Angel of Beauty

Post by psychotic pretender » Tue Jan 29, 2008 8:01 pm

great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889
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Re: Angel of Beauty

Post by TeenPoet » Wed Sep 17, 2008 1:36 pm

Thank you, all of you! =D
"Love is as strong as death. Why be capable of feelings if we're not to have them? Why long for things if they're not meant to be ours?" -Tristan & Isolde

"Reality Is A Funny Thing. There Are No Defenses Against It Except Madness."-Listen To The Silence By David W. Elliot

No matter how many times you've felt it, love will always remain infinite and mysterious. Like God, love runs ahead of us, and just when we think we've caught up, it slips farther away....
-Deepak Chopra
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