Understand me

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Inurooshi
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Understand me

Post by Inurooshi » Thu Sep 21, 2006 5:50 pm

Understanding:

Know one knows what I feel,
All pass by me; life’s a blur, moving rapidly,
My secrets lie embedded in my mind and heart,
Each day I grow weary of hiding what I am,
No one understands, no one even tries to,
Every day I feel as though I am a robot,
Commanded around like a servant,
Just waiting for the moment,
For the chance,
Just to speak out and just to be heard,
Every day all I face is denial,
I feel myself lost, thrown away,
My trust and heart and soul meaningless,
Today is the end of my denial, I say each night,
This time I mean it,
I blow up, all the pressure, stress, and tension,
Bottled up all released in one day’s out burst,
And for that I am exiled and dieing..

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Inurooshi

Post by Debbie » Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:35 am

Inurooshi...this is a sad poem..filled with much pain of how one feels when they want to be themselves and accepted by everyone as themself ......many can relate to this gem of a poem :bow:
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Post by Cure » Tue Sep 26, 2006 6:07 am

you used so much powerful words here in this piece Inurooshi...a very sad & well said poem :thumbsup:
"The sorrow which has no vent in tears may make other organs weep"
-Henry Maudsley-

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Re: Understand me

Post by foreverflame » Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:38 am

Sad but true.

Always seems that the honest ones have the least amount of friends. But the few friends they have are the realest.

:cheers:
"Born into
these crooked ways.
I never even asked to come,
so now I'm living in the days.
I struggle and fight
to stay alive,
hoping that one day
I earn my chance to die..."
- Goodie Mob

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Cyan
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Re: Understand me

Post by Cyan » Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:39 pm

*to the last reply* .. very true

what we would all do for true understanding.. and how often we missunderstand others
"in the bright light of day and even in the happiest moments of our waking spirit we are ordered around a little by the habits of our dreams."
- Nietzsche

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Re: Understand me

Post by silhouette's song » Sun Dec 23, 2007 1:17 pm

"Each day I grow weary of hiding what I am,
No one understands, no one even tries to,
Every day I feel as though I am a robot,
Commanded around like a servant, "


Don't we all feel like that sometimes.
Inurooshi, I just love this and feeling you put into it. :thumbsup:

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Re: Understand me

Post by psychotic pretender » Thu Jan 31, 2008 8:36 pm

such a sad piece

great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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poetgirl122
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Re: Understand me

Post by poetgirl122 » Wed Feb 06, 2008 6:38 am

i read this poem, and i undert\stood what you where saying, sometimes it feels like no one cares, and that your on your own. but sometimes, if you look closely, you'll find that your never alon, great poem. :thumbsup:
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