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Gingy
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Post by Gingy » Fri Jan 27, 2006 12:36 am

What colour is your skin?
Are you white?
Are you black?
Are you purple with spots?
How can you say the exact colour?
You could have red skin,
yellow skin,
blue skin,
pink skin,
green skin,
any skin.
Does it change the fact,
you're human?
they're human,
we're human,
I'm human.
What is it about the colour of skin?
Why are we different?
How can you judge on the colour of skin?
Would you like me to label you
Black
White or
Yellow?
Respect each other whatever your colour.
Remeber whose world you belong to.
People are going to see you, how they want to see you. Everyone is different and unique in their own way. But the people who love you and care about you, are whose opinions really matter.
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Gingy

Post by Debbie » Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:08 am

Amen...good work...beautiful heartfelt thoughts...it doesn't matter the color of our skins..we are all brothers and sisters as far as I'm concerned...we should love everyone...well done dear heart.. :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Post by Friend_forever » Sat Jan 28, 2006 9:30 pm

well written... we should never discriminate by race or colour :thumbsup:
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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Saz

Post by Saz » Mon Jan 30, 2006 5:03 am

Hi Gingy, I like this peom because of the style you used. I think it suited the peom well. luv saz
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Post by Gingy » Fri Feb 03, 2006 2:57 am

Thank you for your kind comments Debbie, Friend and Saz

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People are going to see you, how they want to see you. Everyone is different and unique in their own way. But the people who love you and care about you, are whose opinions really matter.
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Re: Skin

Post by foreverflame » Fri Feb 03, 2006 4:52 am

Gingy wrote:Remeber whose world you belong to.
Humble words of discipline. Real. :thumbsup:

A well expressed poem with a broad perspective.
"Born into
these crooked ways.
I never even asked to come,
so now I'm living in the days.
I struggle and fight
to stay alive,
hoping that one day
I earn my chance to die..." - Goodie Mob
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Post by Gingy » Fri Feb 10, 2006 4:31 am

Thank You

Gingy
People are going to see you, how they want to see you. Everyone is different and unique in their own way. But the people who love you and care about you, are whose opinions really matter.
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Post by heinzs » Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:18 pm

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Post by Maesto » Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:27 pm

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"Tis better to love poetry than to hate it, for it will always catch up with thee"
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