Revenge

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Blackchaos88
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Revenge

Post by Blackchaos88 » Thu May 03, 2007 7:14 am

Those words you repeated over and over to me,
Love made me so blind that I could not see.
But you were just like everyone else, turning your back,
Like every other guy, just trying to get me in the sack.

The smoothness of your words, so seductive,
And the word "us" was just to addictive.
How could I let my walls fall down?
From now on, my feet are staying planted on the ground.

You took apart from me every day,
But I could never find the right words to say.
It's over and I'm done with it,
Bascially I'm fed up with your shit!

Oh don't worry, in the future I'm not going to be so stupid,
Because we all know there is no such thing as cupid.
There is nothing left in me for you, but hate,
And you were so wrong, there is no such thing as fate.

Revenge tastes so sweet rolling off my lip,
Pictured you splattered on a landing strip.
But that is not the type of person I am,
Though I have stopped giving a damn.

You say you will always be there,
Pretending to act like you still care.
But you don't and never will,
The time I wasted on you now makes me ill.

Stop repeating yourself over and over,
Next time before you speak, first try being sober.
You've been kicked outta my heart for good,
Kill myself? Maybe you should!

Now don't try to start new,
Apologizing will get you no where but feeling blue.
Truth is not something that goes with you,
When will you ever just get the clue?

No matter how hard you try to reel me back in,
I'm gonna break free and send you for a spin.
We're over, do you feel sad?:(
If you do, then damn that makes me glad!

As far as I'm concerned you don't deserve a single breath!
But hey don't think I wish for your death.
This isn't just a waste of time, it's getting out the pain,
Don't think you have the slightest chance of gain!

Now there is no gentleness in your voice,
Getting aggravated by your own stupid choice?
Too bad, take your own advice anc move on!
I know I have, so cry those tears until the break of dawn.

I admit now I am beautiful,
All because of you, does that make you feel wonderful?
My time has now been well wasted,
Never by you will my lips be tasted.

This was my form of revenge,
Did it make you cringe?
Remember sticks and stones may break your bones,
But words will shatter your soul


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hey this poem is dedicated to my ex-boyfriend...he is a lying deceiving bastard...i know that most girls will say that about their exs but they were never a mind fuck study

~Long ulive, high u'll fly.Smiles u'll give and tears u'll cry. All u touch and all u see, is all ur life will ever be~

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Post by blackbanner » Wed May 16, 2007 4:13 pm

hey i really like this one. very nice on teh emotions and rhyming.
"We're over, do you feel sad?:(
If you do, then damn that makes me glad! "
love those lines, has a nice ring to it.

oh btw not all guys are like that. i would know. im a guy lol.
"so now he waits
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
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Blackchaos88
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Post by Blackchaos88 » Thu May 17, 2007 6:11 am

i know not all guys are like him..but that is also what he said and then he turned out to be like that ne ways.. i could care less about love and relationships i have come to the conclusion that i am going to die alone and unloved..but i don't really care....and yes

We're over, do you feel sad?:(
If you do, then damn that makes me glad!
that has to be my favourite line in the whole damn poem....peace out

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Post by blackbanner » Thu May 17, 2007 3:10 pm

yeah well....thats kinda sad..there will be some one someday. but yeah its painful. I've gone through 5 relationships in the past 6 months. its hard.
yeah great lines.lol
"so now he waits
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
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Blackchaos88
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yea

Post by Blackchaos88 » Fri May 18, 2007 8:05 am

well that's life everything about it has to be hard...so ne ways asl? i would add u to my msn or something but i am never on it..but i do check my email every day...hit me up some time...never2_late@hotmail.com....i'm currently working on another poem but this one entitled with the name of the guy that put me through all that pain..
peace out

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