Haiku

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midnight_kitty_kat
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Haiku

Post by midnight_kitty_kat » Thu Mar 28, 2013 5:04 pm

My bittersweet Moon
Bouncing your bewitching beams
Soundless as night air


Ha! I thought I had edited this one, turns out the page must have froze or something because it was the same as before!

NOW it's a haiku :wink:
Last edited by midnight_kitty_kat on Sat Sep 07, 2013 9:34 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Haiku

Post by soular » Mon Apr 29, 2013 8:59 pm

Senryu is freer, I suppose. :grin: I'd like to be free.

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Re: Haiku

Post by midnight_kitty_kat » Fri May 31, 2013 12:45 am

I have edited this so that it is actually a haiku now ;). As you can see I didn't have that quite right hah.
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Re: Haiku

Post by midnight_kitty_kat » Sat Sep 07, 2013 9:37 am

:bump:
“I am thrilled to be alive at time when humanity is pushing against the limits of understanding. Even better, we may eventually discover that there are no limits.”
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