I thought, then I'm lost.

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soular
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I thought, then I'm lost.

Post by soular » Wed May 09, 2012 5:26 am

Too much do we know of money
and question lingers

Too much do we know of us
and life goes on

If so, if so.

Hinted from nerve net
so may Internet seem
If so, if so.

Who's that girl.

When all so natural
and not, I feel like crying
Let it sing
I just...

I just wanna know you.
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Re: If so, if so.

Post by heinzs » Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:11 pm

If so, then so be it.

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Re: If so, if so.

Post by soular » Mon Aug 06, 2012 3:59 am

heinzs wrote:If so, then so be it.
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Re: If so, if so.

Post by bags123 » Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:13 am

heinzs wrote:If so, then so be it.

:hello: :thumbsup:
You're starting to sound like Jean Luc Picard of the Starship, "Enterprise". :mrgreen: Nice one Soular. :thumbsup:
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Re: If so, if so.

Post by soular » Tue Aug 07, 2012 4:40 am

:bow: :mrgreen:

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