Autumn, many years ago

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Autumn, many years ago

Post by burdick » Wed May 09, 2012 4:11 am

Wood smoke
Makes my eyes smart
The first night of light frost
Wet leaves smolder white veils for trees.
Fall song.
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Re: Autumn, many years ago

Post by heinzs » Thu Jun 21, 2012 5:49 pm

It is a lovely picture of the smoky mist among the leafless boughs. It's too cold out so I"m going in to sit by the fire.

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