Rose Petals

Forum for your haiku, senryu, tanka, sijo and other short subjects of a general nature of 40 words or less.

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Rose Petals

Post by thief of dreams » Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:09 pm

Silky smooth between fingertips
The slow roll and release
Little piece of my heart
Struggling to beat
While you slowly tear it apart
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche

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Re: Rose Petals

Post by heinzs » Thu Jan 27, 2011 6:49 pm

I really loved the feel of this, the texture of such a short subject. Thanks for bringing it here from facebook.

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Re: Rose Petals

Post by moonflower » Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:35 am

ahh..another beautiful one thief! :thumbsup:
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