Inspire

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Inspire

Post by thief of dreams » Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:20 pm

The tender caress of kindness
Upon a face feared forever expressionless
Quiets the chaos and confusion anew
Clearing the way for progress
In happiness
With thoughts of someone
Anyone
Just like you
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche
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Re: Inspire

Post by moonflower » Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:12 pm

this is very well expressed!..you write beautifully! :thumbsup: :hello:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: Inspire

Post by Jadynara » Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:26 am

I really like this. It's one of those i would like to frame so i can read it everyday.
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011
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Re: Inspire

Post by BeeJay » Sun Jul 25, 2010 11:39 pm

Enchanting, even the shape like a cup that cheers :hello: BeeJay
If the Universe was a little smaller , I may just be able to reach out to you. Copyright © 2009 Baru Gobira
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