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blues
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steps

Post by blues » Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:57 am

every day
another step towards
my future

too bad
it means another one
away from you

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Re: steps

Post by Serenem » Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:56 am

Hello, blues! :hello:

I really like this poem. I've felt this way so often-- when building a life for yourself or moving on from a situation, it is sometimes so difficult to do when it also means leaving some one else behind...

Very, very nice!




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Re: steps

Post by blues » Thu Mar 25, 2010 8:26 am

thank you Serenem

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Re: steps

Post by moonflower » Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:58 am

i like this.. the title is perfect also!.. :thumbsup:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: steps

Post by BeeJay » Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:30 am

Each journey a step , each step a journey.___Beejay
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Re: steps

Post by blues » Fri Sep 17, 2010 11:42 am

thank you so much guys

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Re: steps

Post by Jadynara » Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:07 pm

Awesome. It's really too bad that sometimes to move forward with ourselves we have to walk away from someone who was important to us. :hello:
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011

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