horse clouds haiku
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horse clouds haiku
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cold, clear morning
my horse and I
exhale clouds
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cold, clear morning
my horse and I
exhale clouds
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- heinzs
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Re: horse clouds haiku
Perfect!
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: horse clouds haiku
Very vivid picture,
good work!
good work!
Re: horse clouds haiku
Thank you, heinzs and wblogan...
I'm glad you like this!
Serenem~Melinda
I'm glad you like this!
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Re: horse clouds haiku
i agree!..this is just lovely!
Re: horse clouds haiku
Thank you, Moonflower! The chilly mornings we've had of late and those early morning trips to the barn brought this one to mind! Thank you for reading this!
Serenem~Melinda
Serenem~Melinda
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Re: horse clouds haiku
Hello Serenem, It's a wonderfully smooth read. Take Care
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.
From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02
Sincerely
Michael J Pease
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Well expressed visual...
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Re: horse clouds haiku
Thank you, Tom and MJPease!
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