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wblogan
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Mother

Post by wblogan » Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:15 am

only gone from life
she sits there by my fire
still warming my bones
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Re: Old Friend

Post by soular » Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:20 am

Now it feels an indescribable feeling, described.
Apologies in advance if I get it wrong. :grin:
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wblogan
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Re: Old Friend

Post by wblogan » Sat Oct 17, 2009 7:33 am

When I reread it it did not say, specifically enough, what I meant to say, so I changed it, and me.

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Re: Old Friend

Post by heinzs » Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:44 am

:thumbsup:
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