Miracle Worker

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wblogan
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Miracle Worker

Post by wblogan » Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:25 pm

I could empty the ocean, if wanting it would make it so
Sadly, no man can
Still, I sail around a star, turning each winter into a new year
Not bad
Last edited by wblogan on Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Miracle Worker

Post by heinzs » Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:20 pm

not bad at all...

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Re: Miracle Worker

Post by Queen » Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:32 pm

[quote] could empty the ocean, if wanting it would make it so/quote]
my favorite line.
so is this about keep on keepin' on? cuz that how i saw it
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....

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Re: Miracle Worker

Post by wblogan » Tue Oct 06, 2009 9:14 pm

Queen, :grin: I think that it is about wanting to do amazing things with your life and the realization that your life is, itself, a thing so amazing that it should be impossible, like flipping a coin only to have it land on edge, or sailing around a star. Thanks for asking.

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