..July..

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..July..

Post by moonflower » Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:59 am

..July..

warm blue summer sky
earth kissed by Sun's golden rays..
morning in July
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Re: ..July..

Post by heinzs » Thu Nov 12, 2009 9:05 pm

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Re: ..July..

Post by blues » Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:32 am

nice :thumbsup:
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Re: ..July..

Post by moonflower » Fri Dec 11, 2009 9:07 pm

heinzs..thanks for the bump! .. :grin:

blues..glad you liked!..thanks for reading :grin:
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Re: ..July..

Post by MJPease » Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:02 pm

Hello moonflower, I didn't read this one in July and it's a little to cold to relate to it now. Did I say that it was a bit brief. You know at this time of the year you could try and retro stretch something as warm as July. Take Care
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.

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Re: ..July..

Post by moonflower » Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:26 pm

thanks for reading Michael! :grin: ..its short because its like a haiku/senryu type..(3 lines.. 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables) ..i try and write one for each and every month..i have quite a collection so far! :grin: ..anyways, thank you for reading it and for posting! :hello:
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