my sorrow

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xmartinx=]
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my sorrow

Post by xmartinx=] » Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:42 am

My heart is but an endless pit,
Were the peices never seem to fit,
I sometimes miss i sometimes hit,
But it never only hurts a bit.
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "
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Re: my sorrow

Post by moonflower » Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:01 am

i love this! ..short and to the point!..great work! :thumbsup: :grin:

did you mean 'where' in the second line instead of 'were'? :mrgreen: :hello:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: my sorrow

Post by Debbie » Wed Jan 27, 2010 5:26 am

xmartinx=] wrote:My heart is but an endless pit,
Were the peices never seem to fit,
I sometimes miss i sometimes hit,
But it never only hurts a bit.

Wow short but let me tell you this little poem spoke volumes...well done and great to read you work..thanks for sharing.. :bow:
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Re: my sorrow

Post by MJPease » Thu Jan 28, 2010 7:23 am

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Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.

From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02

Sincerely

Michael J Pease
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Re: my sorrow

Post by xmartinx=] » Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:08 am

thanks for all your comments really help you know...
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "
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