You are now, who you are.

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You are now, who you are.

Post by soular » Fri Jul 03, 2009 5:10 am

I felt the wind
and it's gone

I felt the me
and it's gone

I feel now...
and it's gone
Last edited by soular on Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:03 pm, edited 4 times in total.

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Re: you are now, who you are.

Post by Sebastian Autumn » Fri Jul 03, 2009 8:56 am

The self is never constant and changes like the wind.
I like it. :thumbsup:

I don't know if that's what you meant but that's how I perceived it.

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Post by soular » Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:19 am

Thanks, Sebastian. Reading your comment I realized that wind is the wind,
so I changed "a" to "the". Nothing is constant, while "nothing is constant" is.
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Re: you are now, who you are.

Post by Sebastian Autumn » Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:31 am

Heh, very true, very true. :cool:

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you are now, who are you.

Post by soular » Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:48 pm

:grin:

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Re: you are now, who you are.

Post by wblogan » Sat Oct 17, 2009 7:29 am

:cool:

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Post by soular » Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:48 am

wblogan san,

Thanks much for checking this.

Regards.

Soular.

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Re: you are now, who you are.

Post by Serenem » Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:12 am

I'm so glad that this was brought up to the top! Another thoughtful piece from you... I enjoyed it very much.


Serenem~Melinda

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Re: you are now, who you are.

Post by MJPease » Thu Jan 28, 2010 7:43 am

Hello soular, Kind of like the future is now. Take care
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.

From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02

Sincerely

Michael J Pease

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Re: you are now, who you are.

Post by soular » Thu Jan 28, 2010 5:58 pm

Thanks much for your comments,
Melinda san and Michael san.
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