Final Plea

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Final Plea

Post by Inculta_Dream » Thu Dec 04, 2008 8:01 pm

In reality
A raven’s wing, my last hope
When I need it most

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Re: Final Plea

Post by heinzs » Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:13 am

Usually the raven is not considered an omen of hope... a clever role reversal in this piece. Cheers to you!

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Re: Final Plea

Post by moonflower » Sat May 09, 2009 11:45 am

ravens wings are really beautiful..i, like heinzs, love how they are a symbol of hope in this piece..great work! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Re: Final Plea

Post by heinzs » Mon Oct 06, 2014 9:59 am

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