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Psychology/Sunshine

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Tue Sep 18, 2007 9:29 pm

Psychology/Sunshine

I cut my finger
On a fissure.
And tasted
Winds of empty
And pleasure.
Trickling down my finger
Into the fracture
Dispersing a stranger
With some measure
Of recognition
An apparition
Sometimes most times
Emotion
Has a modified motion
An apparition
Materialized
Like clouds
The color of the ocean
Reflected
In your eye
That could cry
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Post by heinzs » Tue Sep 18, 2007 9:41 pm

An apparition
Materialized
Like clouds
The color of the ocean
Reflected
In your eye
That could cry
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Post by moonflower » Thu Sep 20, 2007 10:44 pm

enjoyed this!..and i like the title..psychology and sunshine seem to go together.. :mrgreen: :thumbsup:
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Re: Psychology/Sunshine

Post by northstar » Tue Oct 23, 2007 7:11 am

,,,,,,,,,,,,so poetic
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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Re: Psychology/Sunshine

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Tue Oct 23, 2007 11:57 pm

thank you. (i was going to insert the embarrassed smilie) thank you three.




originally this piece was to be entitled "the psychology of sunshine".
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