Impurial Space

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Impurial Space

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:12 am

Impurial Space

All of the world
At oceanic heights
All points are precipices
For precipitous satellites
Alien with a face of grey
Oval eyes like orbits
Of suicidal sunsets
Set to freQuencies
That a sky never forgets

Like sequential explosions
Of legions of chariots
Resounding in the momentum
Of acquisition
Leaving nebulas
Of space fabric following
And constellations pulsating
With the history of timeless space
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Post by C.R. Ebowski » Mon Sep 03, 2007 6:43 am

Oval eyes like orbits
Of suicidal sunsets
Set to freQuencies
That a sky never forgets
I love these lines
job well done
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Post by moonflower » Tue Sep 04, 2007 6:38 am

this is sooo good orion!!..i love this part:


Leaving nebulas
Of space fabric following
And constellations pulsating
With the history of timeless space

an awesome write!! :thumbsup: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: Impurial Space

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Thu Oct 11, 2007 9:34 pm

you know i appreciate...

i seek to innovate a revolution in some form...
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Re: Impurial Space

Post by northstar » Sun Oct 14, 2007 12:33 pm

,,that a sky never forgets,,
iam sure about that :cool:
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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