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northstar
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stop it..

Post by northstar » Sun Sep 02, 2007 4:52 pm

we have to ask our selves
about the rain
on dry irony
are you happy ??
iam not
i fall on my bed
like dead,
a shadow
on my floor.

while are you invited on a party tonight


but tell me
why are you still talking to me
with poems?
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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Post by moonflower » Tue Sep 04, 2007 6:42 am

i could feel the emotional upheaval in those words northstar..an excellently expressed piece! :thumbsup: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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