Who are You to Say. . .

Graeme · Post by **Graeme** » Sun Apr 22, 2007 4:24 pm

Who are You to Say. . .

You ride a hot air balloon
through life.
High among the clouds
you look down at me,
tiny worker ant
scurrying around.
With a lord’s detachment,
you judge me
without ever
sharing the experiences
or walking the path
that has made me
who I am.

Post by **nekot** » Tue Apr 24, 2007 5:39 pm

Aye....I feel the eyes of one who is a self righteous judge. I feel strength in your words Graeme. I agree....put that self righteous judge on the ant path; then let him/her declare his/her righteousness.

Graeme · Post by **Graeme** » Tue Apr 24, 2007 6:42 pm

Thanks, Nekot. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your reading and commenting on my poetry. To have an audience is to give voice to my feelings.

Post by **moonflower** » Wed Apr 25, 2007 9:59 pm

theres so much truth in those words!..great work!..

Graeme · Post by **Graeme** » Wed Apr 25, 2007 11:34 pm

Thanks, Moonflower, I appreciate your reading this and commenting.

Milk White Chocolate · Post by **Milk White Chocolate** » Thu Apr 26, 2007 2:55 pm

Yes...to judge is easy, to understand is a completely different story!
You have to walk a mile in someones shoes to understand them better and still you could never know all the ins and outs about them. It's best to never judge...and to follow the phylosophy of " judge not and you will not be judged"
I like your words, they are full of truth...and I enjoyed reading your write!

Graeme · Post by **Graeme** » Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:01 pm

You are so right, Milk WHite Chocolate - thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.

Topics I've started · Post by **heinzs** » Sun Apr 29, 2007 3:32 pm

Blaze · Post by **Blaze** » Fri Jun 08, 2007 7:38 pm

I love this.

Graeme · Post by **Graeme** » Sat Jun 09, 2007 4:05 am

Thank you, Blaze and Heinz, I am so glad you like this poem.

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