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Blaze
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Regret

Post by Blaze » Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:55 pm

In my creative writing class, we were given the task of writing 5 haikus, one of which would to be about regret. Here is mine about regret:


What have I done now?
Sweat pours off of my body
I picture his face.
Last edited by Blaze on Thu Jun 21, 2007 9:34 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by moonflower » Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:08 pm

this is great Blaze!..(you might want to remove the first 'I' in the first line) :mrgreen: ..i love it! great work! :thumbsup: :lol:
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Post by Milk White Chocolate » Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:08 am

:thumbsup:
I like this...
With just a few words...you have managed to make me think of all sorts of scenarios as to why you regret.
A great write...
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