Senryu #1

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Senryu #1

Post by nacona » Fri Nov 17, 2006 12:47 pm

Senryu #1

her body a curved
hourglass tonight
she kisses with time

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Post by heinzs » Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:05 am

An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Post by moonflower » Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:35 am

i love the short simple structure that bespeaks of deeper awesome piece!! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Post by Gillian » Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:45 pm

Superb in its' simplicity. Kudos.


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