November Trees

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November Trees

Post by Gillian » Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:47 am

Naked November trees,
shivering, undressed,
unabashed,
not ashamed to wait
for Spring's clothing.
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Post by Debbie » Fri Nov 17, 2006 10:26 am

This is so good Gillian....enjoyed the read.. :thumbsup:
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Post by Gillian » Sat Nov 18, 2006 5:45 am

Thank you so much Debbie.

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Post by nacona » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:07 am

What an awsome poem, I love the imagery, and the trees shivering in the winter yearning for the clothes of spring! WOW! Simply and awsome read, thank you for sharing!

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Post by moonflower » Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:32 am

this is so great..short but with volumes of images!..i too can see the trees cold and shaking with the winter's cold..waiting for their springtime clothes..excellent work!! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Post by Gillian » Sun Nov 19, 2006 9:48 am

So glad you enjoyed this Nacone and Moonflower. One of the places I can actually see trees from my apartment bedroom window is when I sit at my computer.

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Post by Eternum 1 » Mon Nov 20, 2006 5:27 am

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Post by 4rum » Mon Dec 18, 2006 4:42 pm

The trees wait... for they must
The spring waits, for it is not yet time
For everything there is a season...
...trees, spring, and beautiful poetry.

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