Red Dreams

Forum for your haiku, senryu, tanka, sijo and other short subjects of a general nature of 40 words or less.

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bookdragon

Red Dreams

Post by bookdragon » Sat Nov 04, 2006 6:28 pm

Feet firm on his homeland
the proud warrior stands
alone,
eyes forward, back strait,
never hinting he dreams in red.

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Post by moonflower » Sat Nov 04, 2006 7:24 pm

this is touchingly sad..and true for many..a great poem! :thumbsup: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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bookdragon

Post by Debbie » Sun Nov 05, 2006 3:42 pm

bookdragon I love the way you cleverly wrote this one.... :bow:
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....

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