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by Eternum 1 » Tue Dec 06, 2005 12:22 am
Symbiotic constituent of God's
Omniscient omnipresence
Understands the universal truth
Love one another
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by Debbie » Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:42 am
Beautiful ET...
Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
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by Eternum 1 » Tue Dec 06, 2005 2:26 pm
Thank you Deb.
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by negatvone » Tue Dec 06, 2005 2:36 pm
Nice Acrostic, ET. Excellant choice of words.
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by Debbie » Tue Dec 06, 2005 9:03 pm
Ah ET I really like that little angel...you always bring me a smile thank you friend..((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))
Reach Out And Love Someone
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You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
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by Shane » Tue Dec 06, 2005 9:32 pm
I think just the use of the word "omnipresence" wouldv'e been enough for this ET, but that's just me
Nice work though laddie
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by me and the king » Wed Dec 07, 2005 1:26 pm
Sound of spirit
out of cosmic order
usefull for eternity
lightening our lifes
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by Eternum 1 » Fri Dec 09, 2005 2:34 pm
negatvone wrote:Nice Acrostic, ET. Excellant choice of words.
Thanks Jim
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by Eternum 1 » Fri Dec 09, 2005 2:35 pm
Debbie wrote:Ah ET I really like that little angel...you always bring me a smile thank you friend..((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))
Mon Plaiser, ((((((Debbie)))))))
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by Eternum 1 » Fri Dec 09, 2005 2:41 pm
Shane wrote:I think just the use of the word "omnipresence" wouldv'e been enough for this ET, but that's just me
Nice work though laddie
Shane
Perhaps but omnipresence doesn't imply the other attributes given in theosophy ..omnipotent and omniscient add a linear learning curve which in my mind explains the process of becoming aware for both first cause and us. The universe expands becoming more omnipresent and with it first cause becomes more powerful and through its consituent beings like us all knowing.
Glad you liked, Shane
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by Eternum 1 » Fri Dec 09, 2005 2:44 pm
me and the king wrote:Sound of spirit
out of cosmic order
usefull for eternity
lightening our lifes
Nice rejoinder Me and the King
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by me and the king » Wed Dec 14, 2005 8:14 am
thanks. idone that for better communication.
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by FromZero » Tue Dec 20, 2005 12:51 pm
wow, that was awesome!
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by Eternum 1 » Tue Dec 20, 2005 2:45 pm
Thanks for the kind word and thought FZ.
pax,
ET
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