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just so you know

Post by heinzs » Wed Oct 05, 2005 10:04 pm

just so you know
reality is a dream
but whose?
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Post by shawn2005 » Thu Oct 06, 2005 12:17 am

i like it heinzs..i have to give an answer cause i'm figgity and hyper.
it's each individual's dream.. we are the dreamers inside a grand
nightmare that is being dreamed by an outside being..
sometimes we create a secondary nightmare..sometimes
other people and events do. dreams can teach us so much
about the way reality works
in a nightmare you can alter it by will.. your mind is the clockwork
behind nightmare . the key is taking back control over the bell tower.
we are inside of a larger dream/nightmare.. what is are porpose
in that reality? we are the seminglly random events in that
beings sleep world.. that's why god layed out a plan for mankind
to follow or that's why mankind has the notion because of our
desperate grasp for control of this twillight landscape .. to gain control but the dream world isn't fully controllable
only the uses made of it are to a degree. sometimes it's hard to
tell who is the monsters and phantoms is it the dream or the dreamer?

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Post by heinzs » Thu Oct 06, 2005 12:38 am

we are dreams within dreams
nightmares for some
and in the end
who will do the waking?

Thanks Shawn!


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Post by negatvone » Thu Oct 06, 2005 12:45 am

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Post by Debbie » Thu Oct 06, 2005 6:27 am

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Post by shawn2005 » Thu Oct 06, 2005 10:49 am

sorry for posting all that garbage ...i just wanted to pretend
i knew about something deep...other than the manewer i'm sinking in
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Post by moonflower » Thu Oct 06, 2005 6:39 pm

i love this Heinzs.. dreams are so facinating!..and mysterious!.. :lol:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Post by ninian » Thu Oct 06, 2005 6:55 pm

i like this one heinzs :)

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Post by moonflower » Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:31 am

:bump: i still love this! :hello:
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Post by Debbie » Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:08 am

yes indeed a great one Heinz.. :bow: :bow:
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Post by heinzs » Sun Dec 02, 2007 10:38 pm

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Re: just so you know

Post by moonflower » Wed Dec 05, 2007 5:38 pm

still loving this one heinzs! :thumbsup:
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Re: just so you know

Post by Milk White Chocolate » Wed Dec 12, 2007 2:17 pm

Gosh...that's a question I musn't think about...because I shall never get to the end of it.
It's a bit like trying to think about the universe and where it ends :roll:

Too late...the mind has got ticking! :grin:

I like your write a lot, it's short, simple and very thought provoking... :thumbsup:
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Re: just so you know

Post by psychotic pretender » Mon Jan 21, 2008 8:14 am

great write, great read

i likes it lots
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

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Re: just so you know

Post by heartstrong » Mon Jan 21, 2008 12:11 pm

Exactly what I was thinking.

Maybe reality is a mash-up of the dreams and nightmares of all people. We all end up contributing, in the end.

Excellent write :thumbsup:
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