fairies in the dusk

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Berlie
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fairies in the dusk

Post by Berlie » Mon Jun 27, 2005 7:45 pm

flickering
fairies in the dusk
fireflies
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twisting the throttle
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Richard taylor

Post by Richard taylor » Tue Jun 28, 2005 12:35 am

excellent
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Post by shawn2005 » Tue Jun 28, 2005 12:42 am

i like it too...in my mind i picture "the ugly"
trying to contain their beauty in jars
as they suffacate and wither away
the ugly..become beautiful..
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Post by moonflower » Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:24 pm

i really love this one Kim!..its beautiful! :lol:
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Richard taylor

Post by Richard taylor » Sun Oct 09, 2005 3:18 am

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Post by ninian » Sun Oct 09, 2005 9:54 am

i love it, berlie!

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Berlie

Post by Debbie » Sun Oct 09, 2005 11:57 am

I love it as much as I love those fireflies..
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Post by Berlie » Fri Sep 22, 2006 2:28 pm

anti auto prune :bump:
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Post by Alice » Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:17 pm

Sweet ! :thumbsup:
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Post by wolfschild » Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:19 am

I like this. Well done.
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Post by Ven » Thu Oct 05, 2006 8:07 am

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Re: fairies in the dusk

Post by heinzs » Sat May 21, 2011 4:07 pm

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